User blog comment:Vorknkx/Poetry!/@comment-3547390-20150722073433

That is a pretty good poem Vorknkx! The pacing doesn't feel awkward, the rhyme scheme sounds very good, and the story makes sense. Most of the time what I have heard pass for poems sound like absolute train wrecks to me, like the creator didn't even try. Plus I tend to have an obsession to have poem rhyme, I even proved everybody wrong when they said it was impossible to make rhyming haiku's and I created a series of them that made one large poem.

I tend to get passionate about my poetry, though almost all are dark. Some of my poems are what caused parents to call the school and wish the other kids were out of the class with me, so apparently they had some affect. Honestly I never understood their problem, I tended to keep my stuff rather tame. Still, I like dark, and I get the urge to write a few pages worth of poetry from time to time.