Thread:Stoudemire18/@comment-3547390-20131119140917

Hello, I am curious as to some of the edits you have done in the last day. Due to grammar I have reverted them, plus I wonder what the intent is.

On the slipgate page you added -  Now, It is replaced by most pc nowadays as those old one are simple being dragged away into recycle metal . . Are you referring to crays, which doesn't really have importance beyond their relation to Slipgates?

For the Exit Gate, it is understood that it has to be discovered. Adding those words is rather unecessary.

All shots are supposed to be object in game unless said otherwise. Therefore stating that the Super Nailgun is in-game seems rather pointless.

As for your edit on the Vore -  for your deadly weapon and used the Super Shotgun to deal with .  Which is requiring skill to handling that other weapon that are not available . Deadly weapon is subjective, why the Super Shotgun? Why are the other weapons not avaliable?

I am sorry so many of your edits had to be reverted and I understand you have difficulty with English as you are in Singapore. Still, it is important to keep sentences understandable and not break the language.  