Thread:Vorknkx/@comment-3547390-20120217172929

Hey Vork, I see you have started the walkthroughs. This is a very devoted task, so I am glad I have some assistance and that the work is not completely on me. I see you changed things for consistency, so you should understand where I am coming from when I say there are things needing change.

The pictures are supposed to not have the gun in them, as it obscures the view somewhat. Simply type r_drawviewmodel 0 to hide the gun, and it will come out a lot better.

You moved the Competion Text to make it consistent, but why move it past QLC? Shouldn't it be just after the main walkthrough, as it is what you would see after beating the level?

If there are any keys in a level, mention them in the top, as it is an objective.

That's all for now, the pickiest part is probably the main walkthrough, but as it is not written yet I cannot see how it will be. Remember though to bold and link anything you can, and you should be fine as you are picky on grammar.  