Thread:Vorknkx/@comment-3547390-20120415155017

Pretty good, but there still are some minor things.

You never responded about the Health issue, so I don't know if your opinion on the issue or not.

Also, you are still using notice in your sentences unnecessarily. Make every verb count! That should sound similar to any English composition you ever wrote!

Ammo is not bolded by boxes. Every ammo item is in a box. So it is just appropriate to say 3 Shells, or 5 Nails, or Rockets

In the final secret you reverted to writing about textures again! Also, it is just Silver Door, not Silver Key Door.

Also, what about Movable Walls? I assume half of them are, but as you are the one doing it you would know which are which. Please change the ones that have any sort of movement (you shoot a wall and it moves, a wall moves when you press a button, stairs raising, ect). 