Thread:SirPatticus/@comment-1496755-20121205140609/@comment-5822962-20121223191101

I updated the Stroggos article with moon pics and descriptions, as well as general wording alterations, spacing edits, general tidying up and presentation stuff. How does the whole article look now? Better, I hope!

I don't know what to do with the final 'Civilization' section now though, it seems a bit redundant if I'm honest (I don't know if elements of it can be incorporated into other sections without them looking messy?), and the wall of text in there is quite intimidating... :P